.jpg "001 (wherein a golden egg appears)")
.jpg "002 (wherein a golden egg breaks)")
.jpg "003 (wherein a daughter appears)")
.jpg "022 (wherein a city is razed)")
.jpg "Click here to read the next comic")
Foreboding!
The first panel here is probably the most complicated one I’ve drawn so far (over 10 strips into the story), and it still looks quite alright to me. The TV on the foreground is kinda lame though. Also the egg is misshapen.
The second panel goes back to dull-background-mode. This is something I need to work on.
Originally, the third panel had a lot of “kinetic lines” for the hand, but it looked awful, so I removed them (with a little Photoshop magic). I also added the onomatopoeias after debating it with myself for a while. I’m not a big fan of onomatopoeias, but the strip just looked so liveless without them… all in all, I like their effect here, but I’ll be using them with restrain.
Father’s expression in the last panel isn’t quite what I was looking for. I need to work more in my expressions.
Thanks! I haven't seen Tenchi Muyo but I'm generally aware of its plot, and I can promise you ID is nothing like it ;) Edit: by which I mean that I know it involves aliens and a harem of girls fighting over one guy (the first harem anime?) and about a [...]