http://imaginarydaughter.karchesky.com/archives/001-wherein-a-golden-egg-appears/ An odd little comic about a father and (wait for it) his imaginary daughter Sun, 07 Sep 2008 20:47:43 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 http://imaginarydaughter.karchesky.com/archives/001-wherein-a-golden-egg-appears/#comment-4 Wiske Sun, 16 Mar 2008 21:53:53 +0000 http://imaginarydaughter.karchesky.com/archives/001-wherein-a-golden-egg-appears/#comment-4 You're being way too critical with yourself! After reading through the whole comic (so far) I was reading the commentary on this first page. You're saying that you have this comic to practice and get better. Well I can say that I really love the style of this comic, lines fit your style perfectly, and even if the egg looks different in every panel, it doesn't bother me. It just.. fits. Everything fits! I love the little girl's expression, her hair, her everything, and the story's simple but sweet. Sometimes you just have to be satisfied with what you made, even though you know you can do a thousand times better. It doesn't matter. Other people don't see the mistakes you made, unless you point them out; especially with comics: they're meant to be read, you don't look at a panel for that long. If it eyes right the instant you see it, you've reached your goal! I think what you've created looks good, gorgeous.. and I'm sure you will improve if you just keep drawing and going on :). But believe me as I say that your comic looks great just the way it is! Don't worry! You’re being way too critical with yourself! After reading through the whole comic (so far) I was reading the commentary on this first page. You’re saying that you have this comic to practice and get better. Well I can say that I really love the style of this comic, lines fit your style perfectly, and even if the egg looks different in every panel, it doesn’t bother me. It just.. fits. Everything fits! I love the little girl’s expression, her hair, her everything, and the story’s simple but sweet. Sometimes you just have to be satisfied with what you made, even though you know you can do a thousand times better. It doesn’t matter. Other people don’t see the mistakes you made, unless you point them out; especially with comics: they’re meant to be read, you don’t look at a panel for that long. If it eyes right the instant you see it, you’ve reached your goal! I think what you’ve created looks good, gorgeous.. and I’m sure you will improve if you just keep drawing and going on :). But believe me as I say that your comic looks great just the way it is! Don’t worry!

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